Full IELTS Writing Task 2 essay | STRUCTURE, TASK, SAMPLE ANSWER (Part 1 - Task Response)

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Introduction :

- Present the problem

- Introduce causes and solutions

- Give your opinion / Brief reaction

Body paragraph :

- Discuss the causes of the problem

Body paragraph :

- Discuss the solutions to the problem

Conclusion :

- Give your opinion

- Summarise the key arguments

- Provide a recommendation or a forecast

Question : Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession, what factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?

Give reasons for answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Introduction :

- Present the problem

- Introduce causes and solutions

- Give your opinion / Brief reaction

When young people are choosing what subject to study at university, most of them hope they will find a great job upon graduation. in reality many fresh graduates fail to find work in their field and some are even forced to take up below graduate level jobs. in my opinion, the root of this problem lies in the outdated higher education system that should be moderanised.

Body paragraph :

- Discuss the causes of the problem

Traditional university education does not prepare students for their first job for a number of reasons. One of them is that many programmes are too theoretica. it means that highly educated graduates lack simple skills required for employment, for example, the knowledge of IT software. Employers, therefore, prefer candidates with hands-on experience. Another reason is that universities offer too many courses in popular fields, such as business and law, and do not recruit enough students for engineering and science programmes. as a result, the UK labour market has an oversupply of law graduates and a deficit of engineers.

Body paragraph :

- Discuss the solutions to the problem

A reform of higher education could alleviate many of the problems but would require joint efforts from universities and the goverment. if universities worked closer with employer. they could teach students practical skills that companies look for. Meanwhile, the goverment could develop guidelines on how many students universities should recruit in each subject in accordance with the market demand.

Conclusion :

- Give your opinion

- Summarise the key arguments

- Provide a recommendation or a forecast

In conclusion, a likely reason why many graduates cannot find a job in their field is because university education might not have provided them with the right skill or an in demand profession. i think that universities and the goverment could improve the situation by updating the content of the programmes and limiting the number of students in each subject in line with the market demand.