IELTS Task 2 Writing Band 9 Ultimate Guide 2023

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Band 6

    In the past decades, people are more concerned about having a health life and controlling weight for many reasons. Although, in some regions of the world the numbers of obesity and health problems has a giganticty increased. I think that one of the major problem is that people are not having time to eat properly and the fast foods are an easy option to have a quicky meal. Another problem could be that some people do not like to do exercises to improve their health life. for these two problems. I have some suggestions. 

    Having a quick meal is always a good option when you do not have time to cook at that moment. Most of that population, especially the ones who have access to cheaper fast food chains probably are used to that option when they do not have time to prepare a proper healthy meal. For this, a good solution is, in their free time, people could healthy food and put it small portions keeping them in them in the freezer. Doing this, the people will always have health food storaged in their houses.

    The other problem to keep a balance in health food and lost of weught is doing some exercises to improve the body, not just looking good, but also to be healthy. Working out at the gym is always the firts tough to lost weight, but people forget that doing some other activities could help. like biking, hiking, and doing exercises outdoors could help to improve some of the vitamins that the body needs, especially vitamin D.

     In conclusion, studies shows that the higher numbers of obesity is caused by the highest numbers of people consuming junk food and not doing proper exercises. Of course, people does not need to stop to eat fast food, but decreased consumption could help. As go doing some exercises that they enjoy too could help. Having a balance with health food and exercising is not easy, but if you want to have a health life and live longer, you should give it a try.

Band 9

      In past decades, people were more concerned about having a healthy life and controlling weight for many reasons. Although in some regions of the world the cases of obesity and health problems have greatly increased. I think that one of the major problems is that people do not have time to eat healthily, and fast foods are an easy option. Another problem is that some people do not like to do exercises to improve their physical fitness levels. Nevertheless, there are solutions to these two problems.

    Having a quick meal is always a good option when a person does not have time to cook at that moment. Most of the population, especially the ones who have access to cheaper fast-food restaurants get used to that option when they do not have time to prepare a proper healthy meal. For this, a good solution is, during free time, people can healthy food and put it in small portions keeping them in the freezer for quick preparation later; simply reheat and serve. By Doing this, people always have healthy food stored in their houses.

    A second major problem to keeping a balanced diet and healthy weight is by doing some exercise to improve physical fitness, not just to look good, but also to be healthy and avoid becoming obese. Working out at the gym is always the first thought to lost weight, but people forget that doing some other activities could help. like biking and hiking, to improve blood circulation and vitamin D uptake.

     In conclusion, studies shows that the high numbers of obesity is caused by many people consuming junk food and not doing proper exercises. Of course, people do not need to stop to eating fast food, but decreased consumption helps. Doing some enjoyable exercises also helps. Having a balance of healthy food and exercising is not easy, but if a person want to have a healthy life, live longer, and reduce weight they must do this.